I walk deserted streets where cars are immobilised in driveways, houses look unused and it's unnaturally quiet. I sense tranquillity. But has tranquillity a use? Why not review international minutiae from my past?
I'm travelling one of many escalators in a huge department store in Tokyo looking for a novel by Graham Greene. Two parts of my life overlapping.
The tram taking me from a suburb of Pittsburgh to the city centre must be fifty years old. It growls and squeals like a herd of pigs entering an abattoir.
Cycling home to Stoke Newington, a north London suburb, I see a sign - Eggs: 1s 10d/doz. Resuming, with the eggs uneasily contained in a paper bag, is harassing.
We break the flight to New Zealand by staying overnight at a hotel in Kuala Lumpur. The swimming pool simulates a jungle grotto; I swim under dangling lianas.
Slivovitz is sold by the roadside between Opatija and Novi Vinodolski in what was Jugoslavia. It is frighteningly cheap. Inevitably we drink too much.
A secretary brings a trayful of expressos into the office of a managing director in Milan. Her long hair is dyed a deep copper colour I've never seen before. I am stirred.
I read a book as I dine alone in an authentic brasserie in southern Paris. Conversation around me is close to the threshold of pain yet I am at peace. Tranquil, even.
Breakfast in Cologne. A middle-aged woman works a laptop and I ask her opinion on Brexit. A Danish academic; she disapproves.
My only visit to Spain, the location forgotten. I sit in a beachside café while English pensioners shuffle past on a boardwalk, the living dead.
Today, here: A ravishing smell from the kitchen. Chilli on the hob. A fact worth recording.
I love reading these brief and evocative moments. Each a story, condensed like a clicked photo. Makes me want to try something like this, but I have not traveled the world. Mmm what could I write about? I'll ponder that.
ReplyDeleterobin andrea: The material need not be exotic. Our lives are full of tiny details, passing thoughts, new opinions that are unique to us. Presenting them vividly is a matter of style and avoiding cliché. Thus a gorgeous sunset turns out to be something other than a pretty sight.
ReplyDeleteSome rules. Keep it short, the longest of these is 28 words; brevity is often a test of what is memorable. Look for unexpected comparisons (eg, the sunset that evokes a horror movie). If you're up for it, consider ambitious language (eg, pigs at the abattoir). Distrust first instincts; these are often banal. Convert the commonplace:
Opposite me in the dentist's waiting room were a mother (thoughtful) and her small daughter (playing with a plastic toy). The adult knowing what lay ahead, the child thankfully not.
The experience is familiar; your comment makes it less familiar. It's 30 words. Remove "opposite me", "plastic", replace "knowing what lay ahead" with "knows the future". The prose may then be awkward - the rhythm lost - and may need tweaking.
Imagination, effort and persistence and you may have something that has never existed before. Hey, we all want to proclaim our individuality. What better way?
Roderick-- I just took a nice walk in the early morning sun, thinking about some experiences that might be condensed into imaginative prose. Working on it.
ReplyDeleterobin andrea: Best of luck. One final bit of advice: revision deserves at least as much time as the initial draft.
ReplyDeleteMade me want to put Kuala Lumpur on the ole Bucket List... but then I Googled it, I think I'll stick to Bora Bora remaining the Fantasy destination! *Winks*
ReplyDeleteBohemian: Hey, it was just a hotel swimming pool. I doubt anyone goes to KL for a holiday; my previous visit, fifty years ago, was in an armed convoy on the way to a hospital where, it was hoped, my case of athlete's foot would clear up. It didn't, they had to send me back to Blighty for that. When I said an "armed" convey I should have said only the soldier patients were given rifles. I was with the RAF (Royal Air Force) and it was thought that arming me would prove to be more of a threat to the convoy than the terrorists skulking in the jungle.
ReplyDeleteA minimalist odyssey, with a fragrant reward at the end. Or, in this case, at the beginning. Could be set to music?
ReplyDeleteNatalie: A scattering of trivia made slightly more exotic by the locations. Proof that I wasn't always a round-shouldered anchorite living in the back of beyond.
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